Story 9 Page 6 Metatextual discussion

There was a lot of metatextual discussion here in email chains about 1) how to creation tension inside the event when we know the outcome (i.e Beth is not planning to stop playing Miss Anima) 2) where those lines of tension are, including

• Patin feeling smothered by Gorvo's overprotectiveness
• Dolar really not wanting to take the role of interrogator but feeling honor bound to do so
• Gorvo being overprotective of Dolar as he sees her body language of not wanting to do the role
• Jinnjhals actual culpability in controlling her creations and the effect on her role in the team